#SnippetSunday – Hard-Boiled/Noir WIP – May 24, 2015
Snippet Sunday is a Facebook group for writers I’ve been privileged enough to have been accepted into.
From the group guidelines; “Welcome to Snippet Sunday, where writers come together to share a few sentences of their current project–whether it’s a recently released novel, a WIP (work in progress), or an older manuscript that’s being revived. Intended to hook readers, gather feedback and build an author’s fan base, Snippet Sunday is the FB group that does all three.”
This week’s snippet picks up where last week’s left off. Jake and Deputy Norris are still talking it all over…
“All right then.” He took another look at the Olds, seemed about to speak, then thought better of it. He pointed at my battered right hand.
“You ought to get that looked at,” he suggested. “I can drive you to the doc’s if you’d like.”
“Thanks,” I said, shaking my head. “Evangeline’s got a guy back at the Sunshade. He’ll fix me up.”
“Yep. Santo’s the best.”
Aches began to register in all of the muscles I’d used in the fight. I gave my arms a good stretch.
“You got any idea what just happened between Jed and Marisa?” I asked.
“It’s not my place to discuss domestic matters.”
He chewed on his lower lip for a few seconds, then looked away.
“Unofficially, their relationship’s combustible at best. Combative at worst.”
“Yeah,” he agreed. “And the thing of it is, I don’t know which one of them I feel sorrier for.”
“I have some thoughts on the matter.”
“Just stay away from Jed, Mr. Tunner.’”
“Sure,” I said. “As long as he stays away from me first.”
He looked at me the way you look at a dog you thought was housebroken.
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