Week 28 of the Mid-Week Blues-Buster is in the books.
The magnificent KD McCrite has rendered her decisions…
Take it away, KD!
Thank you, Jeff, for asking me to judge this week’s story offerings. I enjoyed reading everyone’s work and commend you all for taking the time to write them.
In the #1 spot is “Family Calls” by JeffreyHollar. Mr. Hollar told a great story in a short space. He proves to be skilled at story-telling, with a grasp of the “show, don’t tell” rule that is so essential to create a good story (though I would have liked to been able to “see” the ring the mother had given to Andy). This story opens the door to more. Great job!
Number #2 was written by drmagoo. Very well-written with lots of vivid imagery. This writer knows how to engage all five senses, giving readers a sense of being there. The ending is both satisfying and intriguing. I loved it.
In the #3 place is the piece written by theroguetinker. This story sets the reader up for suspense and takes us right through action without letting go of our throats. I could see the scene and felt myself engaged in events. This is a great teaser for a larger work. Super job!
Congrats to all of our winners…
Mr. Hollar– here’s the Winner’s Badge;
Thanks to all of our writers & readers and a special thanks to Judge KD.
See you all on Tuesday…